If I am being picky, image 1 and 10 have no clear sense of focus. Image 3 and 10 are not as compositionally compelling as your other images. Take a look at these artists: Frances Kearney, Hannah Starkey, and Jeff Wall. I would like you to consider what it may mean to have all of your subjects turning away from the camera. How does that relate to Susan Sontag's reading of On Photography???
All the subject matter is vary interesting to look through. It seems like you mainly photographed people on the street candidly. It's a cool perspective, like a small look into the lives of strangers.
If I am being picky, image 1 and 10 have no clear sense of focus. Image 3 and 10 are not as compositionally compelling as your other images. Take a look at these artists: Frances Kearney, Hannah Starkey, and Jeff Wall. I would like you to consider what it may mean to have all of your subjects turning away from the camera. How does that relate to Susan Sontag's reading of On Photography???
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the contrast in the umbrella picture is striking. really adds to the overall impact of the light and dark.
ReplyDeleteAll the subject matter is vary interesting to look through. It seems like you mainly photographed people on the street candidly. It's a cool perspective, like a small look into the lives of strangers.
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