I love your use of muted colors. Image 5 needs more brightness. Image 7 is out of focus. IMG_1967 would have been a better choice for your top ten. Your use of color is excellent however, I wish you would have pushed yourself. Why did you choose those objects? What thought was placed in their arrangement? If none, why not? What did you intend to say with this work beyond the emphasis on color?
In the next h.w. assignment, I want you to show us that you can apply your eye for color along with your camera skills to create something that is uniquely your vision.
The produce was a great subject for this project! Lots of repetition and simple color palette. The photo of the pins is interesting, but could be focused more.
I love your use of muted colors. Image 5 needs more brightness. Image 7 is out of focus. IMG_1967 would have been a better choice for your top ten. Your use of color is excellent however, I wish you would have pushed yourself. Why did you choose those objects? What thought was placed in their arrangement? If none, why not? What did you intend to say with this work beyond the emphasis on color?
ReplyDeleteIn the next h.w. assignment, I want you to show us that you can apply your eye for color along with your camera skills to create something that is uniquely your vision.
The produce was a great subject for this project! Lots of repetition and simple color palette. The photo of the pins is interesting, but could be focused more.
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